Bridges
I feel your breath upon my skin
I feel your breath upon my skin
Soft and
warm within the night
Comforted by
an eternal knowing
You are with
me… always
Paths cross
and we build a bridge
Exploring places
we’ve never seen
Sojourners walk
with us for a season
While others,
will journey to the end
“Remember
me”, I hear it said by many
While your
face, remains my only memory
Early
fires, left smoldering in the night
Turn to ash,
scattering in a morning wind
You will
always be my perfect love
The very
breath in my life
Nothing can
change the beat of my heart
No matter
where the road may lead
DeAnna
DeAnna
Blogophilia Week 49.8 Topic: I Am The Night
Bonus Points:(Hard, 2 pts) Incorporate a lyric
from The Psychedelic Furs
“Remember me I hear it said”
(Easy, 1 pt) Mention early fires
Firsties!
ReplyDeleteI knew who you were without even a name! Good job - that was fast!!!
DeleteSo few ever get a shot at the perfect pairing. That in itself is a treasure to hold... Speaking of a treasure to hold, this poem is definitely that.
ReplyDeleteI actually wrote this inspired by a couple I know...they've got it and I am inspired. <3
DeleteIt is all kinds of inspiration, the good kind.
DeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteBtw, that was me that firsted. :)
Irene
Thanks Irene! I knew your firsties! *hugs*
DeleteOh... this does smolder. And echoes of the bridges to another we seek to connect. Lovely. -Dave Raider
ReplyDeleteWell, I write of what I dream sometimes, Dave. I'm certain it exists, I've seen it. Always good to see you, my dear. :)
DeleteIt is s beautiful connection that some share while others dream of having such. Beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteIt certainly is the prompting of many poets for certain. Thanks Demme
DeleteLove it - such a strong connection that its always part of you
ReplyDeleteI think anytime we love...really love...it never leaves us.
DeleteI've been off kilter for a while and am now catching up on reading. So glad to see you writing again and with such passion! Excellent!
ReplyDeleteIt's good to see several people writing after so many of our muses took their leave for awhile. Thanks Niss...great to see you too!
DeleteLovely write DeAnna :) ~Christine W.
ReplyDeleteThank you my dear!
DeleteSometimes quiet embers still smolder though the love has long gone! Brilliant!! 8 points, Earthling!! :)
ReplyDeleteMarvin Martian
True statement Marvin. Thank you!
DeleteAww! Sweet and romantic.
ReplyDeleteSo very beautiful. The essence of love so beautifully and eloquently expressed. I love it!
ReplyDeleteThis is the week for poetic responses and yours is truly beautiful
ReplyDeleteStormy
Wonderful write! :)
ReplyDeleteDJ