Monday, April 23, 2018

Dancing with Delusions (Blogo 8.11 Writing Challenge)




Dancing with Delusions

Darkness of the night sets in hard
A heart chilled by silent memories of the day
The sun abandons the sky for solace
 While the moon stands melancholy, in place

She weeps softly in the cover of night
For a love that was never shared
Nursing a façade of Eden found
The moment in time… she dared

Nothing is ever as it seems, buried in the umbra of passion
Illusions magically adorned by the hue of the moon.
Shadows carry their own province of deception
An enchanted vision, playfully silhouettes a darkened room

Dancing with delusion, as the clock strikes midnight
The tune tugs the strings of a hopeful heart
Immersed in a dream, once held in reverence
Sold in pieces to the highest bidder  -  a la carte.

It is not love that torments her battered heart
Rather, the loss of another dream she held dear
Yet kisses are a better fate than wisdom
And dancing, trumps stagnation and fear.

DeAnna Metcalf
4/23/18


Ecrits Blogophilia Week 8.11 Topic - Birds and Bees

BONUSES:** Hard (2 pts) Quote or include a line from E.E. Cummings  
“Yet kisses are a better fate than wisdom”
Easy (1 pt) Include a town from Vermont (Eden, VT.)



11 comments:

  1. There is that wonderful dark Tuscan ink that delights. 8 points Earthling

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    1. Wow you were first! Yes...the ink does flow dark from this well. I'm just happy when it flows lately.

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  2. This one just blows me away - it hits hard and deep.

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    1. It was definitely one that reached deep. Thank you Tyler.

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    2. Sometimes when you write I feel it. I don't remember the words, it just connects at a 100% emotional level. Always been that way.

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    3. That is a wonderful compliment Tyler. I feel the same about your writing. Maybe that's one good reason we are friends.

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  3. Oh, girl. I'd say you have no idea how much this resonates, but I know you do. That is a dance I'm most familiar with. *sighs* Love you so much <3

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    1. If it is anything like your poems resonate with me...yes, I do know! Some day girl...looking forward to the dance that doesn't paint the dark. Love you too sistah.

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  4. Wow, spectacular and very emotional xo

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  5. Wow! This is just beautiful.

    Irene

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